Published October 26, 2006
Hiding behind those brown
brown eyes.
Whisper in the snow drowning in
The silence that sticks to you
Like toffee.
wandering, oh
To be more like you
Behind the barricade
we all wish
To watch the stars
And dance with the night
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This is gorgeous--
That last half was really well done, great job!
cx
Pretty. Welocome to TYWS.
Pandora