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Untitled shadows

by sunshine girl


Hiding behind those brown
brown eyes.
Whisper in the snow drowning in
The silence that sticks to you
Like toffee.
wandering, oh
To be more like you
Behind the barricade
we all wish

To watch the stars
And dance with the night

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Mon Oct 30, 2006 2:33 am
cymbeline_x says...



This is gorgeous--

"wandering, oh
To be more like you
Behind the barricade
we all wish

To watch the stars
And dance with the night"


That last half was really well done, great job!

cx




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Thu Oct 26, 2006 11:42 pm



Pretty. Welocome to TYWS.

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